Comments on: Serial Heart – A Septet Poem – Ringing of the Bards http://jojanoski.wordpress.com/2006/10/06/serial-heart-a-septet-poem-ringing-of-the-bards/ Writings, Observations, Poetry, Stories Sat, 05 Jul 2008 04:15:37 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Bob http://jojanoski.wordpress.com/2006/10/06/serial-heart-a-septet-poem-ringing-of-the-bards/#comment-569 Bob Wed, 11 Oct 2006 20:05:04 +0000 http://jojanoski.wordpress.com/2006/10/06/serial-heart-a-septet-poem-ringing-of-the-bards/#comment-569 Hey Jo, I like the form a lot and some really intense images also. Great entry! Take care, Bob Hey Jo, I like the form a lot and some really intense images also. Great entry! Take care,

Bob

]]> By: Terry McDermott http://jojanoski.wordpress.com/2006/10/06/serial-heart-a-septet-poem-ringing-of-the-bards/#comment-559 Terry McDermott Mon, 09 Oct 2006 22:23:25 +0000 http://jojanoski.wordpress.com/2006/10/06/serial-heart-a-septet-poem-ringing-of-the-bards/#comment-559 I like the verse where talk about gold rimmed songs. I like the verse where talk about gold rimmed songs.

]]> By: Ringing of the Bards XVI - Serial Poetry « Talking to Myself http://jojanoski.wordpress.com/2006/10/06/serial-heart-a-septet-poem-ringing-of-the-bards/#comment-555 Ringing of the Bards XVI - Serial Poetry « Talking to Myself Mon, 09 Oct 2006 19:18:35 +0000 http://jojanoski.wordpress.com/2006/10/06/serial-heart-a-septet-poem-ringing-of-the-bards/#comment-555 [...] While we are on the subject of family values, Jo Janoski does an excellent job of dissecting the intertwined values of love and hate in her submission for the ringing, entitled “Serial Heart” (the poem is written in a series of stanzas with 3-5-7-9-7-5-3 syllables): Revolting. Your utterances pepper my soul with contempt. Pitchfork devil dancing in my heart. Silence! I demand you go! Leave me gentle peace. You rile me. [...] [...] While we are on the subject of family values, Jo Janoski does an excellent job of dissecting the intertwined values of love and hate in her submission for the ringing, entitled “Serial Heart” (the poem is written in a series of stanzas with 3-5-7-9-7-5-3 syllables): Revolting. Your utterances pepper my soul with contempt. Pitchfork devil dancing in my heart. Silence! I demand you go! Leave me gentle peace. You rile me. [...]

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